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ARDYN IZUNIA

Ardyn Izunia. Professor of law. Lord of law. Liege of law. The one grading your papers. Leave a message.

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[sotenbori]

I might need help
for a project
dont know much about poetry

[daemonized]

A project. A bingo project?

Of course I'll help. In fact, I need to do something similar. We can help each other.

[sotenbori]

ok dope
whats the basic form of an ode

[daemonized]

Oh, there's more than one type, all reliant on rhyming schemes and stanzas, but why must we adhere to tradition? As long as it gets the point across, I think we'll be fine. The opening line, regardless, should start with "O Janet". Because it sounds better that way.

O Janet, thou art the the zephyr pressing upon Retrospec's sails,

Etc., etc. Ten lines, or thirteen?

[sotenbori]

ok
i don't think i can make it sound quite that fancy but alright


o Janet your blue eyes still shine
even when no one can remember the color
that's pretty great
i bet jim stares into your eyes longingly
but you deserve better than a guy so willing to spark so much hate
unless you like jim
in which case i'm rooting for you
o Janet i hope you are happy
a girl as nice as you deserves to be
but maybe give blue back anyway

ok that was ten lines

[daemonized]

Perfect, the very example of a masterwork. I particularly like the lines that reference to their on and off again romance.

Shall we send it to Retrospec? For what good that does?

[sotenbori]

absolutely we might get something good and we went to all the trouble
do you have to write one too?

[daemonized]

I believe so. And since I've been so thoroughly inspired by yours, let's see what I can come up with. The starting line will remain the same. But my ten lines...

A ray of sunlight in the tumultuous storm
Janet's blue eyes are the sky
Lost to us, found only in her gaze
Share with us your unending knowledge of Retrospec
and what plans you may have for us

For we live in ignorance
only to be brought to enlightenment by Janet
Whom should share her information
with much more grace than the other known as Jim
O dearest, kindest Janet

[sotenbori]

10/10 both nice and getting to the point about important shit

[daemonized]

Thank you. I can't wait for Janet to read all the flattering things we've said about her.

[sotenbori]

i hope she likes it

[daemonized]

I think she'll love it.

[sotenbori]

Thanks for your help, ardyn
I'll talk to you again soon im sure